Here are three new versions, playing with the same two fonts. People basically confirmed what I already knew: I like illegible fonts. What I’m worried about these versions is that they look too basic. I’m a minimalist, but I don’t want to blend in.
(Lisa, I’m going to worry about the copy after I figure out the logo now. Too much going on!)
Thoughts?

Here are three new versions, playing with the same two fonts. People basically confirmed what I already knew: I like illegible fonts. What I’m worried about these versions is that they look too basic. I’m a minimalist, but I don’t want to blend in.

(Lisa, I’m going to worry about the copy after I figure out the logo now. Too much going on!)

Thoughts?